[Four friends and their lives together, versus four friends and everything going wrong. He can see it. That sort of story is something he wouldn't mind reading at all. His hands close over the book and he takes it gently from her hands.]
Just because it isn't something new, doesn't mean you can't make it a whole other thing. Lesson one of Strider humor, always remove something from the original material by at least one layer. You got the genes, you can do it. I believe.
[At believe he drags it out. Clearly doing so on purpose.]
Anyway, I hear you loud and clear. Errors will be noted but not commented on.
[[There's a snort in reply, but she's got a smile that says she's glad he believes.]]
Well I guess we'll see if I've accomplished that or not then, won't we?
[[The story is obviously a fantasy as it begins informing the reader of the setting. How the story takes place on a world that is extremely diverse, made up of four different and distinct lands. The land of Earth - which is warm and full of bright green foliage, the center-most point being an active but not volatile volcano; The land of Fire - a sprawling landscape of bright reds and oranges, the ground black and decorated with magma pools; The land of Water - which was basically just an entire ocean dotted with sandy islands and ancient ruins; And the land of Wind - a bright landscape where the breeze always blows and the sun is always shining, as well as the home to the Kingdom that oversees this planet.
It's about four friends; the Heir to the throne, hailing from the land of Winds; his Knight from the land of Fire; a Witch who lives deep in the land of Earth; and a Seer from a murky cave in the land of Water.
Bet Dave can't guess what this is going to be about. Like he hasn't already.]]
August 10th; Action
Just because it isn't something new, doesn't mean you can't make it a whole other thing. Lesson one of Strider humor, always remove something from the original material by at least one layer. You got the genes, you can do it. I believe.
[At believe he drags it out. Clearly doing so on purpose.]
Anyway, I hear you loud and clear. Errors will be noted but not commented on.
August 10th; Action
Well I guess we'll see if I've accomplished that or not then, won't we?
[[The story is obviously a fantasy as it begins informing the reader of the setting. How the story takes place on a world that is extremely diverse, made up of four different and distinct lands. The land of Earth - which is warm and full of bright green foliage, the center-most point being an active but not volatile volcano; The land of Fire - a sprawling landscape of bright reds and oranges, the ground black and decorated with magma pools; The land of Water - which was basically just an entire ocean dotted with sandy islands and ancient ruins; And the land of Wind - a bright landscape where the breeze always blows and the sun is always shining, as well as the home to the Kingdom that oversees this planet.
It's about four friends; the Heir to the throne, hailing from the land of Winds; his Knight from the land of Fire; a Witch who lives deep in the land of Earth; and a Seer from a murky cave in the land of Water.
Bet Dave can't guess what this is going to be about. Like he hasn't already.]]